Got some great notes on polycount, "The nose bridge is to wide between the eyes, maybe that's what gives you an off spacing feeling. And the eyes-to-ears distance is a bit too big imo" -Texelion. A friend at work pointed out the jaw was forward by comparison to the forehead.
So here is the result of that and some more tweaking on my own of course. Also stepped up a level in face detail.
Right now I feel like she looks good front view but there is definitely something going on not quite right yet on the 3/4 view on the left.